Kia ora Harry! Miro here. I like how you used different types of models. It must have taken a long time!! What inspired you to do this?? Next time, I think that maybe when you do writing in there you could do lots of slides of the same things.
Kai ora, I couldn't really finish it because........... IT WAS TOOOOOOOOOO LONG!!!!! Tino pai tau mahi! I didn't really get the point of the whole story but it was rather interesting....... I think at the start you should say what it was allabout because if anyone watched that they wouldn't get the whole point but I know that it was about war and........ violence! and you should add speach marks to your story. Clara
Kia ora Harry! Miro here. I like how you used different types of models. It must have taken a long time!! What inspired you to do this?? Next time, I think that maybe when you do writing in there you could do lots of slides of the same things.
ReplyDeletethat was so funny I laughed my head of. militarily it was hilorios
ReplyDeleteKai ora,
ReplyDeleteI couldn't really finish it because...........
IT WAS TOOOOOOOOOO LONG!!!!!
Tino pai tau mahi!
I didn't really get the point of the whole story but it was rather interesting.......
I think at the start you should say what it was allabout because if anyone watched that they wouldn't get the whole point but I know that it was about war and........
violence!
and you should add speach marks to your story.
Clara
Well done, Harry. You have put a lot of work into making these movies, and that makes me feel proud. From Mum
ReplyDeleteAnd, I'm super proud that you are the Ngahere Star Blogger this week. Congratulations!
ReplyDeleteYAY thanks!
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