Welcome to my blog, I'm a student at Paroa School in Greymouth, New Zealand.
Wow Harry! I love it. I really like how you have a range of different outcomes and how some of them started the same but still ended up in very different places, maybe next time you could extend one idea so it becomes a full story!
Hi,miss Farr.okay a full story would be cool so might do that if i get time and make a part 2 of obstacles at home
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Wow Harry! I love it. I really like how you have a range of different outcomes and how some of them started the same but still ended up in very different places, maybe next time you could extend one idea so it becomes a full story!
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