Welcome to my blog, I'm a student at Paroa School in Greymouth, New Zealand.
What a funny poem Harry! I like how creative you were. Maybe next time you could add a caption to describe why you decided to write about the toilet? Great work!
Hi Harry, Cool poem it's very funny. Maybe next time make the poem a bit longer. But other than awesome job!
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What a funny poem Harry! I like how creative you were. Maybe next time you could add a caption to describe why you decided to write about the toilet?
ReplyDeleteGreat work!
Hi Harry,
ReplyDeleteCool poem it's very funny. Maybe next time make the poem a bit longer. But other than awesome job!