Setting Sail
We were at the harbour.The wind were noisey and waves were crashing on the side of the dock.
Then we got into the waka, the waves looked like they could destroy the waka.
Then we set sail. the rain was pouring down...
For days we had been sailing and the it was still raining so its been hard to write this.
Four days later.The rain had finally stopped the waves had died down, the sun was setting and...
There was land all we were looking for I started paddling faster and faster we were going to be there in about a day...
One day later. we were nearly there I felt nervous,I looked at the island no people maybe we had found a new island!I had a rest from sailing when I woke up we were at the island.
Then we decided to make a name.I thought we should name it New Zealand because its new and land not that sure about that "Zea" bit they agreed and now its called Officially New Zealand
The End
By Harry
We were at the harbour.The wind were noisey and waves were crashing on the side of the dock.
Then we got into the waka, the waves looked like they could destroy the waka.
Then we set sail. the rain was pouring down...
For days we had been sailing and the it was still raining so its been hard to write this.
Four days later.The rain had finally stopped the waves had died down, the sun was setting and...
There was land all we were looking for I started paddling faster and faster we were going to be there in about a day...
One day later. we were nearly there I felt nervous,I looked at the island no people maybe we had found a new island!I had a rest from sailing when I woke up we were at the island.
Then we decided to make a name.I thought we should name it New Zealand because its new and land not that sure about that "Zea" bit they agreed and now its called Officially New Zealand
The End
By Harry
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