Showing posts with label hard stuff. Show all posts
Showing posts with label hard stuff. Show all posts

Monday, 15 February 2021

Descriptive writing

 It was a windy cold day when we got on the boat there were people everywhere talking loudly We got our tickets and went to the dock we got on the boat and sat at some seats by the window. As the boat left the dock the waves pushed against the hull and made it wobble like jelly. We went outside and climbed up the steps to the roof of the boat the wind blew around wildly. the dark navy blue water was calm but kept the boat swaying with every wave, we saw massive mountains that towered above us in every direction and waterfalls that looked down on us as we sailed past, the spray from the waterfalls kept the boat moist as we got closer to other waterfalls. when we got to the mouth of Milford sounds (originally call Milford haven) we could see the Tasman sea and the waves got more aggressive and forced the boat to get slower. we moved closer to the mountains on the other side of the sounds and turned back in the direction of the dock. we went back to our seats and could smell the salty sea air from the open doors at the back of the boat we watched other boats on the same path as us sailing down to the Tasman. When we got closer to the harbor we saw more boats reversing out of the dock. 

By Harry

Tuesday, 3 December 2019

Summarising


WALT summarise. This is my summarising worksheet.

Thursday, 31 October 2019

Poetry Woofy woof

Woof poof doof lap
ruff sap nap tone
sloosh smack bang stone 
drop plop clop bone

these are sounds from
my energetic dog Jessie

bark and whine and yelp
and pant are the happy 
noises from a Jessie dog
 puppy woof

Today we made rhyming poems with at least 16 onomatopoeia and describing words


Tuesday, 29 October 2019

Dog Poetry

Dog

Dog goes woof
 lapping up water that is splashing in its bowl.
raindrops and plops thunderclaps,
 dog yelps and runs inside to the relaxing sound of water from the tap drip dropping into a cup.
dog goes to sleep when he dreams  he yelps a bit
 and he wakes up to a cheep twitter flap sound

WALT identify onomatopoeia.
My poem was about a dog