Friday 5 June 2020

Onion wives

Onion wives



Long ago six families lived on the outskirts of the village. during the day the men would hunt and the wives would look for herbs in the forest to cook the meat. one day one of the wives found a group of small plant-like balls, they had discovered sweet onions. they bit into them and they loved them! they gathered lots of the sweet onions and brought them home." what is that smell?" said one of the husbands "something is rotting!" said another as they approached the wives they screamed "it's you" they showed them the onions and told them to taste them, the husbands shook their heads and told them that they had to sleep outside that night.the next night was the same and it kept happening the wives wanted them to taste the onions but husbands didn't. after awhile the wives were sick of sleeping under the stars and that night when they were laying on grass they were telling each other that they must leave. The eldest wife knew magic and chanted words, a rope appeared the wives held on to it, and the eldest again chanted magic words and the rope began to rise into the sky higher and higher. the husbands saw them up in the sky and ran outside and they did the same as the wives and went up and up the wives saw this and the eldest stopped them coming up. the husbands were stuck as the Taurus constellation and the wives were the Pleiades cluster

By Harry

4 comments:

  1. Hey Harry,My name is Joshua and I like your story and how it sounded really good with lots of good punctuation, I have question BTW why did the husbands not like the onions Anyways loved the story keep up the great work.

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  2. Hey Harry, my name is Nathan and i am from Edmund Hillary school and i like your story about the wives and the village when they find the sweet onions and i will want to ask a question how long did it take you to write down this story? and i will want to say ka pai keep up the great work Harry

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  3. Hi Harry, My name is Lucian your story was great and I like the story about the wives the oldest one was my favorite and keep up the the good work.

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  4. Hi Harry, my name is Lucian and I really liked your story about the onion wives my favorite wife was the oldest I hope you don't stop the good work

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