Persuasive writing-Are Deserts ugly or beautiful?
I think deserts are beautiful because deserts are also Antarctica and the Arctic, not just the barren burnt landscapes of the high-temperature deserts, I think that both types of deserts are beautiful as they contain vast quantities of snow or sand. I love the way the grey peaks stick out of the creamy white snow and the tan rocky outcrops in the high-temperature deserts. Overall I think that deserts are not ugly but fascinating landscapes.
Today in Whenua we write a persuasive piece of writing, Miss Farr gave us a website with lots of different topics for persuasive writing I chose-Are Deserts ugly or beautiful? We are learning to do persuade as it is a great skill to have and be able to use.
kia ora Harry. I think you have done a great piece of persuasive writing, I agree with you that deserts are beautiful. How to improve this blog post - maybe proofread a couple of times when you have finished writing to check if there are any corrections to make. You know how pedantic your mum is,
ReplyDeletehaha! Thanks Mum